Love the perc in the begginnig. but not a fan of the facotory sounds/ percs. I not a fan of the basline too much either. the pad is very nice for this type of music. reminds me of oldschool techno and trance. I have no problem with it really. I can definently tell how inavon inspired this. the "chorus" is alot better than I excpected thugh!!! great job! love the piano too!
Great composition, although you could have made the segment before the breakdown longer. It feels as if you made this too radio friendly if you know what I mean :) Make this segment longer and add some repitition. It could also need a rolling bassline to help with this. The 303 is great, however I'm not fan of the supersaw pad, it is over used. Other than that, I like this. It's got a very good flow.
Once this song got to the pads, I knew this was going to be a good and true trance song. This song is too perfect! You've successfully made another song that's amazing! Keep making amazing tracks Onyx!
all id have to say is add some voice like some in the future like robotic human voice at about around 48 seconds in but besides that its almost album ready just extend your wobble a little longer that's my advice