Cover of track Rise Up by Savori
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Savori, Rise Up

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My first attempt at EDM

I worked pretty hard on this, and did it all by myself.

I would appreciate feedback.

Special thanks to CeRiX for tips and feedback on this song (and the cover)

2:56 is the best part in my opinion

Work in progress

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    zull

    2 days ago

    I am not going to say anything new, that's why I will shut up (a bit more sounds design would be nice tho)

    But this is a mad banger tho. I love the background vocals. Overall a really uplifting feeling to it.

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    MOOSEY

    2 days ago

    real nicee

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    Stormdrain

    1 week ago

    This is still #10 on charts and it's a month old. lol

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      Stormdrain

      about 1 month ago

      The mixing and mastering is nonexistent, there's no sidechain, and the percussion sucks, and the sound design is super basic and uncreative. Those are the only problems I have with this track.

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      All harsh crit aside, I'm actually very surprised you were able to make something this good at your level. The transitions are fantastic, the chords are p great, melodies are amazing, and I hear some neat hats in there too.

      All around, nice job on making a good track!

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      Icebox

      2 weeks ago
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      SYNRGY

      2 weeks ago

      Jesus christ that last melody is so high

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      :):):):)

      3 weeks ago

      Wow. I like this a lot! Nice Job!

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      ▽Momo▽桃.

      3 weeks ago

      i like this

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        Elite_Gaming

        3 weeks ago

        Hi

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        Vizil

        about 1 month ago

        Gamers Rise Up

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        EscapingReality

        about 1 month ago

        Love the melody! And I KNEW I heard the High Pitch EDM Arp in there! (I'd know that sound anywhere- I used it in a bunch of my tracks lol)

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          CeRix [/\]

          about 1 month ago

          i keep telling you guys he's really good at melodies

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        R0veR

        about 1 month ago

        this is good

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          CeRix [/\]

          about 1 month ago

          telling you this now, it won't go well. at all....... you might not wanna (message to both of you two)

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          R0veR

          about 1 month ago

          want to colab

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        CeRix [/\]

        about 1 month ago

        ACTUAL FEED TIME:

        0:00 - 0:08 : its waaaay to early for you to use vocals. and you should have made chords instead of that up and down synth thing

        0:00 - 0:32 : you started amazing but after 0:16 it turned weird and it got to exciting at the worst part

        0:32 - 0:44 : random af

        0:44 - 1:04 : you nearly hit really nicely

        1:04 - 1:20 : this would be better if you mixed it and layered it. bc its SO HIGH IT'S ANNOYING

        more feed coming below bc im running out of chars

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          Savori

          about 1 month ago

          So many words

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          CeRix [/\]

          about 1 month ago

          so my conclusion:

          - learn how to mix

          - learn sound design

          - nice drums but not edm presets

          - don't use vocals yet

          - layerrr

          - use more effects

          - turn down the highs got damnit

          - this is amazing but it has it up and downs... litterally and figuratively

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          CeRix [/\]

          about 1 month ago

          More Feed:

          The whole song: drums are not edm

          1:20 - 1:36 : unaturally long transition

          1:51 - 2:09 : that be the only time i like that up and down synth thingy

          2:09 - 2:23 : nice. but random

          2:23 - 2:39 : Damn those drums are really nice. but no sidechain

          2:39 - 2:55 : repeated the first drop. was not executed well. and more weird stuff

          2:55 - end : holy crap gg that melody is amazing and would be better if better layered... and not so much highs

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        I am DJ (remix comp)

        about 1 month ago

        pretty good, but i'm to new to give you any real crit.

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