A while ago I found some stems from "Welcome To The Real World" lying around in Audiotool's sample library. I liked the singing and the melody a lot and decided to try my first remix. The only elements remaining from the original track are the vocals and some noise sweeps. The rest is all newly composed and arranged. I hope that you like it! You can find the original here: (link is only visible to registered users)
I'm listening on headphones. I think the bass isn't truly a sub bass, so that might be why I think it swallows.
Currently, I notice the middle part has sub bass too... So I guess itself alone in the beginning is too loud, but it fits when other elements are introduced.
Not sure if it's my speaker's frequency responses: the sub-bass in the beginning seems to "eat out" everything else. Should be lowered just a bit. Everything else sounds good, nice arrangement!