I think I would of prefered Uprising's version better. You need to lower the pitch a bit, because it doesnt really mix well with the song. Tried compressing some beats or adding a couple of rasslebocks, just try and make it so its a remix and not just a twiddle with the knobs. Maybe you could add some synths with the pulvs or summat. aye its not bad thoug, but it just dont do it for me.