yah, thats true. im going to work on that on the final version. this isnt all of the song either, this is kinda a mash up of main ideas for the final track
By bringing the frequencies down even more at the beginning, you can build it up more. The envelope might need to be shorter at the very beginning and slowly open up to where it is at
0.07
. The growl gets buried at
0.48
, I think that may be the cymbal has the same frequencies as the higher frequencies in that growl. If you can figure out how to fix that, that will help.
1.11
is kind of abrupt and doesn't really fit in context.