You may look like it's all right,

You might act like it's all right,

But you're hiding something,

And you won't tell what.

It's Eating you on the inside,

its devouring your soul,

yet so you won't tell,

what's going on.

-Karan Pol

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    thedoctor

    about 9 years ago

    Sorry alch, I'm not sure why this wasn't faved. Maybe the server was all dicked up. Well Again, Great work. : )

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    thedoctor

    about 9 years ago

    Great Track Alchemist, Your doing very good. :) And the poem means a lot to me.

    I can relate. One day I'll put a personal poem of mine up on my wall and you'll know why I like this one so much. Awesome work.

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    Alckhem

    about 9 years ago

    thank you rabbit and jinx :D :):):)

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    LowFeel

    about 9 years ago

    very beautiful!

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    Alckhem

    about 9 years ago

    yups

    :)

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    tornsage

    about 9 years ago

    nice meditative groove i love this - sometimes you find yourself in a dark place with no way and you cry out but nobody seems to hear - in the end you realize you are really crying out to yourself :)

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    yafee?

    about 9 years ago

    :) !

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    WhiteGrizzly

    about 9 years ago

    Belle melodie!! :)

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    Alckhem

    about 9 years ago

    thanks uprising! :D:D:D

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    Uprising

    about 9 years ago

    i like the arpeggios

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    Uprising

    about 9 years ago

    good work man !!

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    Alckhem

    about 9 years ago

    thanks coma! :D:D:D

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    Comatoast

    about 9 years ago

    Very nice :)

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    Alckhem

    about 9 years ago

    THANKs DIGI!! suprisingly, i only worked around 2 or 3 hours on this one. :D but thanks for the comment!

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    digigeist

    about 9 years ago

    nice song man!

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