Some things you should change: The hi-hats are a little too low. So are the shakers and cow bell thingys starting around
1.30
. Perhaps get a compressor or a kobolt into a centroid and raise the gain. Also mabye at
4.00
get some dubstep bass (like the ones in my track (link is only visible to registered users) and then if the other parts are too low then compress everything or automate the gain in a centroid to immediately raise. Good track though!
I would add a reverb on the rattles maybe, sorry I hav nothing else to say, I agree with jace mostly because his music is everything mine wants to be :) but a very nice ambient maybe minimal? Track :))))
Slap a compressor on all the percs except the bass kick (NEvER compress, unless you know what you are doing/you want it to be sharp and not as boomy) xD But anyway, a compressor will kind of even out the percussive sound so that no one sound is overpowering another