Despite that I personally very,very new at music creation :) I would like to say some criticism.
I like this track. The beginning is good, so it could be whole new ambient track in the future, I mean part from 0:00 to 1:42 and starting from 4:23 to end of this track ^_^, EXCEPT part from 1:48 to 4:22 because it is very distracting from theme of the track.
But In my opinion part from 1:46 to 3:01 is also can be a new track.
