This is going to be my new song, BUT, I think I can make it better. Leave me some (constructive) criticisms and critiques in the comments, so hopefully I can get a little better and make my music a little less crappy. Thanks for the help in advance!

Enjoy!

UPDATED! Version 1.2

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    ĐỢℬໂ尺ᗰ∀₦

    about 5 years ago

    yeah, good work! btf

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    kung pao

    about 5 years ago

    Funky bass lines funky wobbles funky ideas funky funky

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    Steampowered

    about 6 years ago

    Awesome song Nauzk, this makes me want to start raving =)

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    Nauzk

    about 6 years ago

    Thanks @Karl Vegas and (link is only visible to registered users) I'll try to check out the bass when I can.

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    Karl Vegas

    about 6 years ago

    Yea cool :)

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    Skyvoicer

    about 6 years ago

    Very good, maybe the bass too strong...but nice track ;)

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    Nauzk

    about 6 years ago

    Thanks (link is only visible to registered users)

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    ollie

    about 6 years ago

    Great stuff here man :)

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    SOLACE

    about 6 years ago
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    Polygon Cube

    about 6 years ago

    i like the simplicity, maybe it could use come more stuff, but as it stands its good for me, feels almost like ambient :D

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    okayyy

    about 6 years ago

    Nice track, maybe needs some more variety

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    Dark Matter

    about 6 years ago

    you caught me at a good time my friend. I was soo bored I was looking for soemthing to do lol.

    try to change the synths up a little. give it some veriety, but so far i'm liking it.

    maybe make the drum beat a little more interesting and change it as the song goes on?

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    MΛVΣЯIX

    about 6 years ago

    :3 i acculy have 32,000 people protecting me so i dont have to worry

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    Nauzk

    about 6 years ago

    Well, while you're being riddled with lead, would you mind offering some criticism of my song?

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    MΛVΣЯIX

    about 6 years ago

    ~ - plays rick roll and watches bullets hit him instead- :3

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