Cover of track trying to make futurebass pt.2. crit? by Mells
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Mells, trying to make futurebass pt.2. crit?

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ima finish this later, but for now i would love some (construtive) crit.

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    asianeyes

    about 11 months ago

    Dosent sound like future bass buuuut it sounds like dance which is f*cking sick

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    elodge66

    about 11 months ago

    noicebut the snare is a bit loud compared to the synths at the start and it spoils the intro, just saying

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      Mells

      about 11 months ago

      thought i took those out, huh i'll re-pub

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    Rin Minato

    about 11 months ago

    maybe don't do panning either, really screws up your mix

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    Rin Minato

    about 11 months ago

    that sweep at the drop is wayy too loud, also maybe you should look for better supersaws, or make your own

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      Rin Minato

      about 11 months ago

      totally up to you, im just here to help :)

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      Mells

      about 11 months ago

      yea, i want to get better at sound design, i might try in this one, not sure yet.

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    DADDY

    about 11 months ago

    this good soo far but i agree with Apoc

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      Mells

      about 11 months ago

      yea, lol it was so laggy i wanted it out lmao

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    ApoC

    about 11 months ago

    I like the punchy snare that you used and also how you didn't just use samples and call it a day haha

    Anyways, my criticism would be to make sure to level out the synths and drums so that they don't damage the mix. What I mean by 'mix' is your actual song.

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      DADDY

      about 11 months ago

      i agree with him

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      Prox

      about 11 months ago

      yes he is right

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      Tray Broskie is Back!!!!!

      about 11 months ago

      yea he is tellin tha truth but Broskie i have faith in you and thats all u need

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    YUKI雪 (Hiatus)

    about 11 months ago

    nice, but the chords are built a bit too easily

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    YUKI雪 (Hiatus)

    about 11 months ago

    the melody on the lead is good tho

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      Mells

      about 11 months ago

      Thanks bro!

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    Snowfire

    about 11 months ago

    Ooo not bad. I might remix this.

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      Snowfire

      about 11 months ago

      XD Yeah, thats true. Plus theres also the 8 to 9 gigs of music I have stored on here too....

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      Mells

      about 11 months ago

      lol on chromebook, anything will get backed up lmao

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      Snowfire

      about 11 months ago

      XD I might then, but for now I wont touch it. Im going to clear out some browsing data and stuff like that too, because my storage on here is getting kind of full.

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