Feedback and structial critizism is appreciated
This tracks still in its early phases, ALOT IS PRONE TO CHANGE, This is a track im working on from scratch and only using the studio (NO RECORDING) and hope to make my best track. Im asking a few people for Ideas and Help, But i'll take anything from anyone.
"The sky's dark. The air is cold. From the crystal like drops, you see an angel."
*OPEN TO COLLAB IF YOURE DECENT AT MAKING YOUR OWN TRACKS*
Hey! I got some feedback on this track, and I want to push it further.
Main things I’m trying to improve:
• The lead sounds a bit too “retro/square wave.” I might want to soften it or add pads (Not sure how, so help would be appreciated
• A couple of people mentioned my phrasing might be cutting off too early instead of finishing full ideas. I'll see about that.
• Finally, I didn’t include much of my usual gating/stutter style and want to bring that back
Hey! I got some feedback on this track, and I want to push it further. Main things I’m trying to improve: • The lead sounds a bit too “retro/square wave.” I might want to soften it or add pads (Not sure how, so help would be appreciated • A couple of people mentioned my phrasing might be cutting off too early instead of finishing full ideas. I'll see about that. • Finally, I didn’t include much of my usual gating/stutter style and want to bring that back
i worked on it a little, cleaned up the mix and stuff, lmk what you think when you get a chance