-Hey guys this is my vocal track,i hope y'all enjoy it! : )

-Special thanks to @DopeSlinger(Check the EP) and @Mircode for helping me produce this track <3. They're really talented so please go check them out!

-I know the quality of the vocals wasn't that good, This's because i really don't have any materials or good mic to record with. Sorry guys i'm currently poor and kinda homeless.

-So yet even tho the track wasn't that good,but we did our best to make it success.

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Lyrics:

Vocal verse 1) Breath~

I've losing all my sleep to sleep

on you

I said breath~

You've been calling out my name

to hand it for you.

Vocal verse 2) Maybe i can make it right~

Just wait for me to hold it tied

No matter the world is going to

die~

I will always be on your side.

Rap verse 1) She call me baby

she got on my bed

she think i'm dizzy

i sell her my breath ( yeah )

I don't know why me

i got no breath

she don't fuck me

i got her a date. ( yeah )

Rap verse 2) I just wanna stay

I just wanna play ( yeah yeah )

I just wanna date

I dont wanna break

I just wanna stay

I just wanna hate ( yeah yeah )

I don't wanna play

Cause i dont give a shit~

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    ᗩRG◈N

    13 hours ago

    maybe if I spam my song on everyone's wall it'll get some attention. (idk, i just want to get noticed)

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    Snowfire

    1 day ago

    Nice nice. I like how you did this, and I don't mean to bash on the vocals or anything, but make sure you're working on your timing a little more. Even if you've got terrible equipment and all of that, the timing is what will really bring out the vocals are despite that the set backs and will really bring everything together. Besides, some people like the low fidelity sound, me being one of those people. Good stuff though dude. :)

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      yito (Rmx Comp)

      17 hours ago

      1:32 , but that might be the overall mix, would look into that.

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      yito (Rmx Comp)

      17 hours ago

      agree with what snowfire said. Something to add would maybe be a bit of a better mix on the vocals. I know that it is really difficult on AT, but there seems to be some clipping going on.

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      Zowey_is_a_myth!

      22 hours ago

      Using the metronome when recording is super helpful with keeping the timing. As well as good flow. :3

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    vaporrek

    23 hours ago

    Very nice attemt at vocals. Its the fact that they sometimes dont go in sync with the beat that throws me of

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    ѕυяαιѕυツ

    1 day ago

    turn up the vocals a little they a little quiet compared to the rest of it

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    ѕυяαιѕυツ

    1 day ago

    freaking fire

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    ѕυяαιѕυツ

    1 day ago

    bars

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    Zowey_is_a_myth!

    1 day ago

    can I remix this and add more vocals?

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    Merchant

    1 day ago

    mae the vocals more clearer to make out honestly

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      Bobby

      1 day ago

      I can try

      But yet if you look the description, maybe you'll understand why tho lol

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    Master Kohga.

    1 day ago

    Alright dude this tune makes sad vibes....

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    Alko

    1 day ago

    interesting

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    cone man swagger

    1 day ago

    vocals could use work, but good job :)

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    LUCA$

    1 day ago

    FIRE

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    MOOSEY ♪

    1 day ago

    niceee

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    ❄ WINTER ❄

    2 days ago

    fye

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    ✨Breezy ♪

    2 days ago

    flames

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