it opend the mouth and ate the light

the darkness was unexpected

it did´t want to exist in this void

so it closed it´s seeth eyes

and the light appeard to sparkle out of the dying flesh

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  • The only things I can think of that you could improve is to add a studioenhancers to the mains synths to make it have a more full sound to it and maybe use a slope on the notch wave setting aswell. Maybe also on the same synths you could also mix pan some of the operators (I think this would work best on the bass synth). It's up too you really if you can be bothered to re-publish :) once again, good work

  • Good work :) Let me just open it to see what you did and I'll give you feedback

  • Not really my kind of thing but the swirly synths are really good, needs a sub bass tho ;)

  • So I listened and I have absolutely no advice. Brilliant song! I absolutely love the drums! and what you did with the rasselbock is amazing! Great job!

  • I can't listen to it right now. :/

    The waveform looks very clean except the last two thirds, the new synth taht you added in there either need the frequency taken down, the volume, or needs some compression. But that's just from looking at it :P I still haven't listened yet. All your stuff is pretty much genius so I'm sure I'll like it. :)

  • This is something different than most people on here! The percussion is the best part!

  • great!!

  • what kind of music is that=)?

    thank you @dustin Ross

    i could listen to this in a loop my friend :D @Nion

    are there to much automatications? @Night Eyes

  • Awesome track ! I really like the bass sound design, I guess there sre a lot of automatisations (:

  • good mellow tune

  • xD u´re funny

  • done=)

  • yep^^

  • xD