Yes mate, this is your best track by far. This is really good. Congratulations! This is the track that takes you to new recognition around here I believe. I'm very happy that this one is doing so well. You deserve it. Enjoy it, remember it and let it inspire your next one. PS, I love the Skrewface sample. I told him that the first time I listened to that voice I laughed out loud and you've put it to good use.
Actually, I was playing around with it earlier, it's not a bad idea, but the bass line I got there is already a fluke. I don't want to ruin it by trying to make a new one. xD
@syntax would side chaining the bass beat and bass line help with the clashing? i'd also think about lowering the bass line or maybe adding a lower one, but thats just me :p
Yes, I think I'll try to remix it. So far I've added/changed the some samples, like "it really hurts", but I couldn't find any good whisper samples, but found a replacement. Next I'll probably start messing with the drums, which seem to be the biggest part of the track. I really hope my laptop will be able to handle this.
@JonJon, Yeah, I noticed that too. I was going to balance it out, but I'm really tired. xD @r4c7, My style continues to change as I like to experiment. And good luck, if you try to do a remix, I would greatly appreciate it.
Good track. I'm not sure if it's your best because I don't know your music so well (Don't feel offended, I don't really know that many people's styles that well). One thing which I can think you could do is give this song a really creepy ambiance by adding whispers in certain places and by replacing the "it really hurts" with something else, but that's just an idea, and if you don't do it, I might try to do it in a remix, although this looks way too complex for me at my skill level.
Great track Syntax, also like the organ. The one kick bass you have in there seems to clash a little with the sub bass but other than that it's really good, lots of energy! :)
Awesome! I agree, it is your best track :) Maybe a new melody at the drop? just an opinion , though I do like the organ acting as a kind of pedal in the drop! Great track though :D
I like the organ sound. The kick seems strange to me <the beeping/buzzing sound in it>. It might be nice to have a break from the organ to another synth or possibly a melodic line to act as a break up. I do like the organ chords overall and how you build them up. I'm not very good at critiquing dnb though. This is just my gut :)
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ABADDON
nice.. agressive..
Teqtoniq
interesting
Syntax
Thank you Starz! At least someone thinks the samples are good! xD
Audio M.D.
Yes mate, this is your best track by far. This is really good. Congratulations! This is the track that takes you to new recognition around here I believe. I'm very happy that this one is doing so well. You deserve it. Enjoy it, remember it and let it inspire your next one. PS, I love the Skrewface sample. I told him that the first time I listened to that voice I laughed out loud and you've put it to good use.
Syntax
Actually, I was playing around with it earlier, it's not a bad idea, but the bass line I got there is already a fluke. I don't want to ruin it by trying to make a new one. xD
Dustin Ross
@syntax would side chaining the bass beat and bass line help with the clashing? i'd also think about lowering the bass line or maybe adding a lower one, but thats just me :p
hellomynameis
very nice love it!
andremoda
cool, sample-creation from me used in other Tracks. Nice Song :)
EATERMAID
This is sick niqqaaaaaa
TopHat
love that rassle!!!!
Cripta
nice one!
Syntax
Oh, that's a cowbell, I didn't really know what it was, I just thought it was some kind of synth kick.
yafee?
g1 m8! :)
Frigolito
Great use of the cowbell!
daftwill
great inspiration ;) good track
r4c7
Yes, I think I'll try to remix it. So far I've added/changed the some samples, like "it really hurts", but I couldn't find any good whisper samples, but found a replacement. Next I'll probably start messing with the drums, which seem to be the biggest part of the track. I really hope my laptop will be able to handle this.
Syntax
@JonJon, Yeah, I noticed that too. I was going to balance it out, but I'm really tired. xD @r4c7, My style continues to change as I like to experiment. And good luck, if you try to do a remix, I would greatly appreciate it.
r4c7
Good track. I'm not sure if it's your best because I don't know your music so well (Don't feel offended, I don't really know that many people's styles that well). One thing which I can think you could do is give this song a really creepy ambiance by adding whispers in certain places and by replacing the "it really hurts" with something else, but that's just an idea, and if you don't do it, I might try to do it in a remix, although this looks way too complex for me at my skill level.
Jonjon
Great track Syntax, also like the organ. The one kick bass you have in there seems to clash a little with the sub bass but other than that it's really good, lots of energy! :)
Hbeao
Awesome! I agree, it is your best track :) Maybe a new melody at the drop? just an opinion , though I do like the organ acting as a kind of pedal in the drop! Great track though :D
arche3.0
I like the organ sound. The kick seems strange to me <the beeping/buzzing sound in it>. It might be nice to have a break from the organ to another synth or possibly a melodic line to act as a break up. I do like the organ chords overall and how you build them up. I'm not very good at critiquing dnb though. This is just my gut :)
DB
first listener's opinion... very filling dnb! i love the synth especially at 1:17. is that a rasselbock effect?