So you spent many months on these 36 seconds or is the full track somewhere? don’t hear icebox in this. Your voice reminds me a little on the voice from the JJ72 singer.
Interesting approach, definitely worth finishing.
I spent many months on this track but I need advice on how I can make it better, the original draft of this was too much for my pc to handle so I had to use the bounce timeline thing to upload it as a sample. The idea was insipired by Icebox's style of music but it's also a mix of my own style, though I'm not sure if it's good. How can I make this better? I need advice. (Don't make fun of my voice please, I tried my best ;-;)
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So you spent many months on these 36 seconds or is the full track somewhere? don’t hear icebox in this. Your voice reminds me a little on the voice from the JJ72 singer.
Interesting approach, definitely worth finishing.
i like the instrumental!!! i think the mixing on the vocal is the main issue, it feels like it's in a different "space" than the rest of the track if that makes any sense. try turning the wet signal on the reverb down, or EQing the high frequencies away to push it back a bit. if all else fails experiment with delay on the vocal instead of reverb
It's okay, more stuff could've been used like a chorus, slope or a quasar to make this thing pop a bit. Maybe add a couple of synths and add effects to make it sound a bit ambient. Other than that, good job.
Nice
Beautiful song, love it :~) a very cool vocal melody
I like it. Don't feel discouraged to continue practicing. I believe you have potential to express yourself in creative ways
Its cool. I reckon the autotune needs to change if you used any.
First, make some more layers, add some pads or something to really make the music stand out.
Second, get rid of some of the reverb, too much of it can really drown out the song, and make it sound a bit empty.
I like how the vocals stand out, they're mixed quite well(from my shitty earbud perspective), but maybe add some effects or add some vocal layering, like an octave lower, or higher, or adding different layers and then panning them left and right
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Vocals are a bit too loud, and they need to be tuned to certain parts. I would also work on layering the vocals (That doesn't mean just layer the same sample on top of itself, you need to have 3-4 different recordings) to add some depth to it. After you've done that I'd suggest you add some Delay to the vocals, nothing too crazy. The beat could have overall been executed in a better manner. It's not bad, it just needs fixing.
This is ok, it just needs mastering for the vocals and we need more instruments... all I can say its good and needs to be finished.
Beautiful idea, I like it. I would like to hear the full version.Then it will be easier to provide advice, since the options for track development are wide.
hello eshaan,
i really like it, it needs to be a bit longer so where the track stops is a drop, and it goes to another sound that followes the main chords and they go together to add a bit more ambience, and the melody also gets copied to another sound and both of them go together, and the drums get louder with a bigger snare and kick (hat is optional), this seems really cool and i like the idea of it!
also the vocal is a bit too loud so you can just turn it down a bit.
salut eshaan c'est tres interressant ton approche, poursuit, creuse et reste dans ton idée et dans tes choix, c'est la bonne voix !!
I like it though its very interesting.