I'd have the same feedback as @callycus, I know I'm not original sorry lol. I can see the song's aesthetic though, which I like more than the usual trap songs made on here! You could also introduce different alterations of that arpeggio to give more progression! :)
Kick is a bit too flabby for me, stereo?, and sounds like it's clipping.
Drum percs are all in one space, try panning them out a little more across the stereo field. Also sound a bit dry.
For me that snare is a bit too basic/bland. Just sounds like the same thing in every other trap song.
I like the bass in the intro..shame it drops off a bit in the main section, but it's still cool.
I also like that lead, and the little delay on it is a nice touch too.
not bad but I'll tell you otherwise sometimes the 808 is too loud
yeah I know that too lazy to do sum abt itđź’”
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I like it! Kick is a bit loud though
I'd have the same feedback as @callycus, I know I'm not original sorry lol. I can see the song's aesthetic though, which I like more than the usual trap songs made on here! You could also introduce different alterations of that arpeggio to give more progression! :)
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Kick is a bit too flabby for me, stereo?, and sounds like it's clipping. Drum percs are all in one space, try panning them out a little more across the stereo field. Also sound a bit dry. For me that snare is a bit too basic/bland. Just sounds like the same thing in every other trap song. I like the bass in the intro..shame it drops off a bit in the main section, but it's still cool. I also like that lead, and the little delay on it is a nice touch too.
Could be cool to send that delay through another ping pong delay on occasion for added ear candy moments.
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this isn't too bad I could vibe to this while I work
keep working on this, not bad, needs a fast beat and some cool sounds? just a thought. Check out JID 31 freestyle and see how sounds work for a song.
oh this a remake it sounds unfin. on purpose
lead
idk the original tbh, but the lead is working for me
Lead tryna run away