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man that sure is music
Tho it looks like alot of time and ik alot of effort went into this so i'll give some crit
The vocals are just added ontop of the music with no really rhyme or reason and it's very jarring. The melody has no progression or different angle for 90% of the song and when it does change it's very uninteresting. For how much is being used in the song it feels like none of it is being utilized very well. The drums are also very basic and carry no compelling rhythm
I never understand this sort of excuse "Oh i wrote it in 2023"
Okay then redo it then. Take the lessons you learned and improve upon it rather than squander it's potential.
It's what i do all the time with my music that's now over 8 years old.
It's an excuse, Not a reason why it's the way it is
I Wrote this song in 2023, and I think I released it in 2024? Although this is a remaster, I do know what you mean. The only reason this remaster exists is it's going on an album where the theme of the song fits into the progression of the albums meaning.
In a nutshell, this song is basic because when I wrote it I didn't know any better.
For a better idea of what I can do, listen to LoveStorm, my latest song as of right now, it's about how owning a dog for me has been humbling :)
