i do this without sound, i dont know if sounds good or fucking bad

EDIT: when i made "deafness" i was on a pc without sound, that is the reason of the name xd, this is the most "growing" song because i put a lot of hours for this "is a fuck song" and don´t sound like i want, some parts sounds very high and causes deafness lol this song is from april 2016, is the survivor with "red blue" and "exodus", maybe when i will know use better garageband i will add some instrument samples, the beats of this song are the better, i want make a real song and i bet for this.