All my setups are pretty effect heavy. :P I think the main deal with me is that rarely incorporate drumlines into my work, more just let the rythmn come out on its own.
I think this could be better though. Keep with it and consider reducing some of the effects. It looks a bit heavy. Try cutting petals on and off while listening to it and see if sounds don't balance out more.
I’m not entirely sure why I’m trying to make anything at the moment, I guess it’s out of bored mroe than anything. There’s no major inspiration and my stuff sounds terrible to me.