I would get rid of the noise in the background that kind of phases up and down, and maybe add a couple of trance/lofi ambience in it's place, but make it a bit more reverby than the rest, and quieter too.
![Cover of track Justadream [Lofi - bump] by Cosmokickerr](https://api.audiotool.com/track/nip2y1vplg/cover/512.jpg)
Give me some feedback.I would appreciate it.
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AG's feedback: Almost finished
Niteowls probably first and last feedback: almost finished
FRED's feedback: being worked on.
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Well I like the last chord in the progression, spicy
But the other chords could be a bit spicier and one of the notes in the first chord ma;y be out of key
Not a fan of that thing the sub is doing in the background, I'd make it louder and play something more consistent instead of gliding constantly, something in key to properly accompany the main chord progression
Also you may want to add a lil reverb to the snare, not too much (and preferrably quasar)
And you might want to learn about (1/2)
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Sounded alright, eq like someone else said, I might give more feedback tomorrow
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the melody is good it just needs some eq; you wanna compress it a little bit
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drums are kinda cool but it feels dry..
add some reverb or a rain or vinyl effect
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this is needs a ton of eq
