This isn't quite as good as your previous track. :0 On the note of constructive criticism, this is very boring and repetitive. The harsh synth is uneven and puts off the entire balance of the track. The sweeps are not anything to help, maybe give false hope that there is more to come after the first verse. The kicks are a bore and are very much repetitive as well. Hope this helps, brotha! Nice job overall, though. :0 I couldn't make effects such as these.