Pristine (Sky Entry)

sky
620 Jan 29, 17 Other
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Trying something new for once Thanks aura for a competition, this is was hella fun. If you haven't entered yet, do it now because competition offers a good challenge, having lots of fun, and finally.. a chance to win some shit. So yeah anyways, heres my entry. Enjoy <3

         
sky
Feb 11, 17

I may of lost but hey this competition was fun af and what made it more enjoyable was me being able to have enough inspiration to be hella more creative

Fluctus
Feb 2, 17

mildly adequate

Derrenno
Jan 31, 17

nice. 99 percent better than mine

sky
Jan 31, 17

Might add a new lead in this

sky
Jan 31, 17

I feel as if the lead is too solid

Noir
Jan 31, 17

You should also probably adjust the notes those plucks are playing. Right now it sounds like they're playing really weird tensions (harmonic extensions) that aren't present in the chords or melody. You might also want to use stronger leading in the melody.

Noir
Jan 31, 17

Yeah, nice groove! For the melody synth, keep in mind that it's a pretty vocal sounding synth, so you want it to kinda breath a bit. Adjust the tuning on the second knob a little as it runs through the line, either using the built in modulation or manually.

reyd.
Jan 30, 17

this has such a nice flow to it <3, just don't no think that clap really fits

sky
Jan 30, 17

I gave it that exploration feel to it

sky
Jan 30, 17

Thank yah brah

ExPe
Jan 29, 17

I also really like the synth you used for the chords. And jeepers, I love that lead you used at !

ExPe
Jan 29, 17

You're welcome, dude. Much deserved.

sky
Jan 29, 17

Thanks man, I really appreciate it <3