Yeah man, this is awesome, I really like it. I love the vibe that ended up coming out of it, it's very unique. The only thing I can really say that you should work on with it is the issue of the clipping, although that can generally be fixed with a bit of eqing as far as the higher frequencies of the track go and all. Good stuff.
Oooo this is cool dude, I like it. I'll give you better feed back tomorrow when I'm not half asleep lol. Thank you for remixing one of my tracks.