I'd suggest you fiddle and exercice a bit more. Open up other's people's work. Learn from it. Rinse & Repeat and then maybe advertise your track a bit. Because honestly I cannot say anything about it. Apart from the fact that I'm glad you don't use any samples.
@Tottenhauser Thanks for the advice
I agree with Tottenhauser
I'd suggest you fiddle and exercice a bit more. Open up other's people's work. Learn from it. Rinse & Repeat and then maybe advertise your track a bit. Because honestly I cannot say anything about it. Apart from the fact that I'm glad you don't use any samples.