This is the first song I have published and I was kinda just exprementing.. so if you like it, tell me, and if you you have any suggestions, please tell me.

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  • Check out The End of Time (JustTh3Basics Re-do) Paz, I fix up the voice in that one.

  • I like it. I do think it would be better if you made the first melodies an octave down, and got rid of the vocals. I do like when the handclap, I'm guessing it was, came in around .21. That was cool.

  • Thank you Gabriel! :D

  • I like it :) but I agree with Poly... but Really Very good composition.!

  • Thank you so much!

    I'll keep those things in mind!

  • not bad...although i feel the extra melody starting at .36 sort of clashes strongly with the beginning and middle parts, just a though though :D

  • Sorry guys, I meant to type experimenting :P