those intro snares are very nooby bro. use the trap snare sparingly. dont over use it. and that riser synth, add a chorus and brong down the speed maybe? it sounds so raw and grimy. Dx but thats my only critique i think. you laid out the 8o8 kicks pretty well, and the track in general has a great vibe and idea going for it. just has to be better mastered and organized :) those hi hats were placed very nicely as well :)