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I was asked by you to give my opinion, and when asked I'm always brutally honest, so here we go: it's a fine synthwave tune you've produced, but there are some things that sound a little off.
1. I think it would sound much clearer if your synths could go easier on the release times and not be too overindulgent in terms of octave doubling, especially the lower ones, as these are creating a lot of mud in the low-mid register.
2. The panning of the vocals, especially the long one in the beginning, feels quite unbalanced. Probably due to the combination of being quite long and being quite far off center. If you still like the idea of vocals that are not centered, I'd suggest that you refrain from panning the long ones too far off and save your creativity for the short ones, which could actually bring a lot of excitement to your arrangement if done with taste, making them pop up here and there within the stereo field.
Nice track !
Sympa la basse ! Bien synthwave comme j'aime :) Marrant d'ailleurs le son de mélodise sonne bien comme une mélodie de guitare électrique
J'aurai peut-être ajouté un peu de delay sur ce son, mais c'est qu'une question de goût je pense. Sinon je suis d'accord avec Naswalt sur la filter envelope !
bravo encore une fois
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Love how pentatonic everything is on this! The only thing I'd change is adding a little filter envelope to the chords, that way they start bright, but get more mellow so the other parts can shine
The cover art hits just as hard as the song.
thats so cool!! i really like what you did :)
i like the melodies and sound design. overall great piece!
i dont have any critiques to give i just think this is amazing
i just head banged so hard to this that now i have a headache
I feel like im in a futuristic video game dystopia
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ooooh man!
THAT REEEEEEEEESE!!!!!!
Nice work on the melodies, I really like the different melodic sections. Some things I would like to mention is that you could use more synths in those different sections to differentiate it a bit. I really like the clean pad sound coming at 03:16 , I would want to hear more of that in the track tbh. Also some build-ups, filtering or use of different instruments could give this some more tension/relief dynamics. A track that is fairly linear and blends sections just through melodic change... [1]
Thanks i m going to work on this !
...is great too and it's not something you hear often, but more build-up or silence or leaving an element out for a while could give this more dimensions. Also the bass could be a bit heavier in the lower end, that is somewhere in the sub range (80-50Hz). Really great work though, composition is great and leveling well thought out and fairly clean. [2]
ITS SO GOOD
