I like this the style reminds me of hyperpop a little or rage.
I would say something about mixing but I'm listening to this on my phone at half volume and it's already super loud so I'll just wait until I get on my computer🙏🏾
and I'm not saying it's completely bad, if this is the style you want to do it and please feel free to disregard what I said I'm just giving my opinions, and I do like it.
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0:51
I didint notice that you added an Arp here now that I'm listening to it on my computer,
if I can say anything, I do feel like Mixing should be the next priority, to me it kind of just sounds like you're slapping a bunch of chords on top of each other at different times and it's turns into a amalgamation
1:17
on the other hand is great, I don't know what rage chords you decided to cut for that part but I honestly think that's my favorite part of the song