Hey, Icebox and Sim made the original, decided to remix this, i thought I would make it more ambient. 1st time mixing vocals, idk how it came out. Hope you enjoy, in case you wanna know, this is basically a remix of raise your hand(feat. Icebox) This is for a battle I'm doing right now. Hope ya like it. :) I wanted to end it on piano for some reason, just seemed right for me.
The arp has too much lowend, the intro doesn't really fit the transition from
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. It sounds off key. Arp in the chorus has too much peaking frequencies. Drum beat is boring, doesn't really change. THERE'S NO FUCKING BASS WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. Ending doesn't fit (
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) AND HURTS MY EARS@ !1!!1! The whole track is pretty boring to be honest, all because of NO FUCKING BASS WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. Anyways my last crit of adddivide is THERES NO ASS
I don't know how to mix vocals, so I can't help much on that. I'd suggest adding more drums and panning them to increase the stereo width, as well as some slight pulsar delay and quasar reverb on the synths. Also, the intro sounds a bit weird imo, probably due to the synths sound design. And giving more space to transitions. around
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, can be done with a full stop in sound sources and some reverb to fill the silence (instead of a volume automation suggesting the end of the track)