Just listening off my iPad side speakers I can already hear the synths aren’t the cleanest I can’t lie. You really need to take out those 20k peaks innit. They also just sound quite basic, yk? Add some effects, adjust some frequencies, mix ‘em. Try to be a bit more nuanced and make a unique style out of it :) I’m working on this myself.
The beat fye asf but canera shot fx can be more on the beat plus the snare is too many times on the beat i will prefer if u change snares sometimes cus the snare getting repetitive and anoying for me but Overall the beat fye asf