Honestly, i really like the drums and i really like the noisey arp a lot
I think I'd add some multiband compression to the drums to tame some of the harsh high-end and make that second synth more of a bass sound (good old growler or reese would fit the track style!)
I also think I'd personally make the intro a little shorter.
Great work though! Almost feels like the main arp is 2hollis inspired