demo thing exparament thing

Femur (arts)
4 Jan 15, 25 Other
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minus the first part, what do y'all think of the seconds sound together? mainly the notes and stuff,how do y'all like it?

         
Femur (arts)
Femur (arts)
Jan 15, 25

also that into was supposed to be cut out but I forgot so yeah ignore it

Femur (arts)
Femur (arts)
Jan 15, 25

also prolly gonna matter it somewhat like this, so hows the composition and also mastering.

Femur (arts)
Femur (arts)
Jan 15, 25

other than that I'd love feedback.