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Allright I like the synth melodies and how they go together. The sung vocals are allright not that I get goosebumps or so but as good as some singers of famous Indie Rock bands anyways.
But honestly the rapping is hectic, breathless and completely without a sense of rhythm. Maybe concentrate on training your voice a bit more in the direction of singing. I feel a bit like Simon Cowell now 8/
I also recorded on first take and uploaded it. Kinda a joke, but it was fun. I fixed a lot of stuff but I don't own the project so I can't reupload.
There's a complete lack of energy behind the vocals as if you were trying to be quiet and you're trying to mix two completely different energies between the track and the vocals. Vocals need mixing as well. the "YAH" is loud and honestly made me laugh. It has potential but work on the mix and I agree with Simon Cowell above.
thx
bruh, hmu if i can produce or sum
purty noice
