This is just a WIP. Just to be clear.

Edit 2: Added in a few more effects

Edit 3: Scraped the lead patrtern and added a bass pattern.

Edit 4: Attempted a new lead pattern, but it sounds bit off. I'm loving the bass now though!

Edit 5: Removed part a kick sample and made some minor changes to the lead pattern and durmline.

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  • Excellent! The new kick drum is perfect!

  • Next edit will be the final, I need to get on with my life and make more music.

  • XD Didn't read the description, did ya? Anyways, thanks for the support.

  • Oh I see! I wasn't aware it was still a work in progress! Well keep it up, I cant wait to see the finsihed product!

  • Thanks, I'll get working on that right away. And I perfectly understand the lack of purpose; The only reason I made is is because I could. And the silence is there because I'm not done yet :P

    Thanks for the criticism though!

    (I have tons of kicks, I'll just swap them out one by one to see what sounds nice.)

  • Overall, a good first effort!

  • ok you asked for criticism. idk what you have the machiniste going through but that kick drum is a bit out of place.You should turn down the drive a bit. I liked the overall feel but it lacked a purpose if that makes sense. Also you should get rid of the silence at the end :)

  • IF YOU ARE LISTENING TO THIS:

    Good job. Now leave a comment with moar criticism so I can get better.

  • Now to clean up the bass (mabye).

  • Needs a better intro....

  • And figure out what's happening to that first note.

  • Listening to this now, I need to make the snyth clearer.