Cover of track An Unfinished Puzzle by Citryx
  • about 6 years ago
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Citryx, An Unfinished Puzzle

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Life isn't the same without you.Mardi Gras is not the same. Christmas is not the same. Easter, too. I am not the same. Grandpa is not the same. The house isn't the same. Nothing is. I keep your picture in my wallet, and it's just about the only thing that gets me through the day. I drive your car, but it feels empty without your direction. I write music in hopes that you will hear it in your celestial home. I hope you are proud. But I feel that what I do, now is not enough because there is so much that I didn't do. There's so much I wish I would've said. There's so much I wish I could've done. Wish I could hear that you're proud of me, or even get to see your smile. I wish your hand wasn't clenched, so that I could hold you lifeless hand, in hopes that maybe you'd come back. I wish I could say everything on my mind. But, alas, I cannot. All I have to maybe get to you is a melody. A melody and a prayer. You may be gone, but my love still stands strong. I love you, Nana.

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    blizzy.

    about 6 years ago

    One more thing,,, XD. Fix that snare. Find a more sharp punchy one.

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    blizzy.

    about 6 years ago

    also EQing out bass in your pads and snare can clean up your mix tremendously.

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    blizzy.

    about 6 years ago

    Honestly your mixes need more head room. I find I would enjoy your tracks more if they had better mixing. When ever a new sound comes in it doesn't have its place in the mix it sits on top of the other sounds. Using more panning and volume change could really help these problems. Also in Drum and Bass it is hard to sidechain. You dont want the drums killing the mix and you dont want them to be too quiet, but in this track sidechain a bit more. Make the drums hit harder!

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    DamnLullaby

    about 6 years ago

    The great piano from start,and melody as good,great track clearly!It is hard work to play piano with machinist !!!!!

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    DarkDescendant

    about 6 years ago

    Just one listen earn you the life you so desperately need :P Listen today and chart this baby!

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    Division

    about 6 years ago

    ok

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    KroniX

    about 6 years ago
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    Division

    about 6 years ago

    today.....

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    KroniX

    about 6 years ago

    Lets help @QUILL get this to the top charts today guys.

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    KroniX

    about 6 years ago

    Very nice dude gave me the chills when the piano came in. Wish you the best, its not easy letting go, but we have to at one point in time. Very sorry for the loss, I will be here if you need anything.

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    DarkDescendant

    about 6 years ago

    This track is just gorgeous though! Please feature!

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    DarkDescendant

    about 6 years ago

    Amazing! So sorry for your lose mate :'(

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    Belody

    about 6 years ago

    oh my god the piano in all your tracks impresses me so much every time

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