Cover of track archaic by in
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in, archaic

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    Fleuve

    about 8 months ago

    O_O

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    NASSIV

    about 1 year ago

    cooooooool

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    Ciel

    about 1 year ago

    duuude

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    in

    about 1 year ago

    Republished

    whoops

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    super deformed

    about 1 year ago

    fuck mixing dis shit BANGINNN

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    Thankful Noir Greyson

    about 1 year ago

    Part of the difficulty in giving this critique is that I can't really see how you made this. There's a little bit of phasing going on with the sub against the blips. That probably means that the samples you used weren't quite the tempo they said they were.

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      in

      about 1 year ago

      Thanks for the advice. You're correct that it is a sample. I'm not confident on my own sound design in that area just yet but I'll put my own pad synths in my next track and leave it open for you to check out if you don't mind. I'll fix all the technical issues you mentioned as well. :)

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      Thankful Noir Greyson

      about 1 year ago

      Also just in general, there's a little bit too much going on in the subbass and it's drowning out everything else. Maybe don't use so many kicks in such rapid succession, or maybe try scooping out a little bit of the subbass with a PEQ.

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      Thankful Noir Greyson

      about 1 year ago

      That can actually be rhythmically interesting if it's intentional and done effectively, but I have to be convinced that it was intentional. This doesn't sound like you meant to do that. The ending is very abrupt. It sounds like you're using a sample there and you just sorta reached the end, so maybe look at designing your own sounds to get some more control

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