makin a chrissmus album

my first track that iv'e made in a while

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    Zir0h

    about 3 years ago

    love the structure though, the way the bass fades in and out and the way it transitions. i like that speech at 2:06 , you can see how the vocal sample comes out loud all of a sudden, and then gets quiet? that's because your bass signal is covering it up. I love that loop, I've used it in a draft before, I recommend keeping it, just make it a little clearer so people can hear it. all in all not bad though, man. I would keep building on this if I were you

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    Zir0h

    about 3 years ago

    the quality here isn't great. just needs a little polishing. those bells sounds like they're breaking up. I would recommend making your own bells and writing the notes in yourself instead of using that loop. the bass sounds okay but it's too fat, it's taking up too much space. turn down your EQ gain on that low end a bit, turn your dry/wet to dry a little bit. also that white noise/record scratch sound makes it sound muddy mixed with those bells, especially overtop that bass.

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    burg

    about 3 years ago

    nice, but at least be following me if you're gonna post your track on my wall

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    okin

    about 3 years ago

    this makes me want to eat all the mince pies :)

    sick work!

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