This is my first legitimate song that I put effort in. Any criticism is welcome as I am always looking to improve!

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  • shoutout to me press play every 30 minutes because I thought plays were cool lmao

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    idk kinda made it louder and changed some stuff

  • Generally I like the mood and it sounds pretty good! One pretty small suggestion I have is to pitch the cymbal001 a little down with the machiniste following the chords a bit. The same-pitched cymbal is a little repetitive.