Complextro 8-bit (GS)

So i wanted to learn how to make Electro/Complextro hmmmm so i went to the best :) "Syntax" most of the sounds created were in fact made by Syntax however i took a nice template she made for me and turned it into something Horrible i mean i guess this doesnt sound to bad but hey iv been learning strickly nothing but dubstep in the short time iv been on here and i wanna learn something else and although this may have certain qualities that it takes to make complextro i think i bombed on this haha but truthfully i dont care sounds good to me..... if you dont like it dont be ashamed to tell me and i do realize alot of ppl are not for the whole 8-bit sound and thats ok you dont have to like everything i publish.... and this is going back to the fact that when i did start on AT it was not meant to gain friends for that matter i didnt even know there was a community and at this point if the community doesnt like the fact i put out some not so good tracks then suck it im learning! at least im trying and again thank you Syntax for taking the time to make a template for me inbetween your game play :) please i would like to make more complextro so let me know what to work on!!!