as subtle sound effects can help make your piece feel less copy-pasted. LoFi songs tend to end either happy, sad or "wandering" (somewhere in between or uncertainly). This track just fades away which I don't like a lot. I think it would be nicer to have a cadence into a final chord before the track ends. Good job otherwise! I see you put a lot of effort into this! (2/2/)
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This is a style I love! I think it sounds a bit robotic though. If you have a MIDI device try recording some instruments like drums yourself with different velocities. This can help with velocity control and making it sound more "human", because that's what LoFi is all about, weather it is one person contemplating his loneliness, his life, etc. There is still a bit of repition, but LoFi also sits a lot on samples SFX. I think adding some ambient samples like a forest, beach, etc. as well (1/2
