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Thanks! I felt Frustrated because it felt a little repetitive and like it was missing something before the end.
I can't see why you'd be frustrated. This came out pretty good.
Thanks for the tip - I was getting a little frustrated with this one so I just left it as it was without and ending.
I like the way you made everything flow together, although the ending could have been better.