Cover of track Paper plated hoops by Elderbury
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Elderbury, Paper plated hoops

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    eirots

    about 7 years ago

    Beginning is a little bit repetitive. Maybe take it back about 18 measures. But the way it builds makes me think of Daft Punk in a good way.

    Scratch that, the whole beginning reminds me of Daft Punk.

    Also, try to work on your transitions a little bit more. Instead of having one part die off and having the bass keep going, try fusing them together.

    Not trying to sound like an ass with this comment, just trying to honestly help.

    -Eirots

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