My first attempt to make a song. Please give constuctive criticism.

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  • lol, it's ok

  • It was short because i got bored and decided to finish it. Only then did i realize that it was so short. Also, @14Flame I'm not sure what genre it is. I'm sort of a n00b when it comes to electronic music, because I've only been listening to it for about a month.

  • actually it's not lame it's just a little to little for me. Hope u get better, this is better than some things i know.

  • to little, to low, to lame. Maybe it's just me because i'm not liking this, but since it's your first it's ok. I think that u should just add a lot more instead of repeating the same thing.

  • Sounds good keep it up.

    Also make it longer, but since it's ur first attempt it's should be good the way it is.

    PS: What genre is this, Ambient.