Trapped in your mind,

Your mind is lost.

You try to find a door,

A door in which grants freedom.

You cannot escape

The repeating dark forever.

Never to return

For eternity..

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  • This song is so emotional... I dont know if its just me but this song really took me to another place.

  • thanks bro.. be sure to listen to your stuff later when i can

  • Thi is sick man you did an amazing job here.

    Love the description :)

  • :O

  • You're good :D

  • Lol 0:00 - 3:00 reminds me of "portal 2" music if you don't think of the sound affects

  • great track ! some very nice lines

  • Thanks for constructive criticism - i know it seems kinda odd to just change up drums like that, but i personally believe its necessary because it needs a breakdown and i feel like it wouldve been redundant to just keep the drums the same throughout, you know.. And 3.00 -end is probably my favorite part of this track.. btw, Approaching Human, still haven't gotten to that track yet; i've been dealing with a lot, recently and its been hard for me to work on AT

  • BTF

  • I think what he means by not liking the 3:00 - 4:00 part is that it interrupts the flow of where he thought the piece was going. I think it's a personal preference because I felt it kept the atmosphere of the mood. One thing,however that I think you could have done was keep the drums the same because the piece loses its momentum. Now, that could be how you wanted it, so it's up to you, but overall I think this extremely well mixed and balanced, and the sounds are very deep and evoking. Awesome work.

  • that's wonderful sound idea - nice work man :)

  • Thanks all of you for your comments and criticism, but i appreciate constructive criticism :O

  • This "Enterprise Wobblings FX" sounds like a galactic mysterious Plasmafog...nice melo too, but dont like it at 3:00 - 4:00 ...complete a nice complex work...

  • The Poem in the Description is really cool nice Trippy lil toon too