lemme know how i did

first time trying trap like this

lemme know if you want remix on

ill repub once i get a lot of crit and have the time to apply all the changes

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  • needs a harder bass

  • Cool track !

  • The chart

  • can't think rn so i'll just list a few things

    808 is off key, not by a full note, but probably like 30 cents or something

    808 needs more lowend

    bpm is a lil too fast

    drums are kinda repetitive, and the drum selection is kinda generic

    needs wider synths and some panned stuff to fill out the stereo field

    • tyty

      all stuff will fix soon

    • this is really cool though, i like the melody

  • needs some more ear candy, more stuff in both ears to fill not just the frequency spectrum but the LR spectrum

    • i suggest being yourself with your music

    • follow someone else’s style and make it better

    • yeye np

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  • the bpms a bit too quick and the drums are p repetitive

    • ik

    • not 15 or 20 cents

      i mean in the wrong key

    • i thought they were off, but my headphones are kinda broken, so ill go back and fix this

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  • I suggest you stick to the 2 bar rule (add or take something out every 2 bars) to make the mix more dynamic and interesting. and follow 7rixus's ideas as well.

    • or just keep the changes consistent, that works too

      (2 bars is sometimes overkill)

    • ok

  • Republished

    tempo edits, shorter

    will edit more soon with headphones

  • need some crit

  • Republished

    dumb cover