that intro section is pretty sexy, drums especially have really nice flow. where the build is it gets pretty empty, I'd recommend adding a vocal samples from a game or movie to make things a bit less empty.
with the drop it looks like to me you're trying to resample a ride into a gun, which is a cool idea, but i recommend a LOT more processing on it (compression, eq, distortion, etc.
where the drums are in the drop, crashes and cymbals will keep the entire thing moving foreward
this is sick