As Pendragon said, the whitenoisy thing is a little painful, and it's almost all I can hear there. The kick is fine but the snare is too quiet. If you don't already have sidechain on the synths I would highly recommend putting some on
i gotta crit tho, whatever that hissy sound that begins at around
00:33
at the far edge of the stereo fields is a bit painful due to how high it is, and lows feel lacking lol, the track is begging for a stronger sub
Almost don't want to comment because there's already way too many comments due to that one idiot, but this is pretty nice, could definitely see this being expanded and extended a lot :)