hey this is really nice... you just need to bring the drums' volume down a little because it's kind of taking over the melodic side of the tune. to be frank the rasselbock also kind of destroys the parts from the middle onward. the random stop is effective but because it's mostly the same all the way through (not a bad thing) it's too unexpected and probably comes across as weird to a lot of people. other than that... it's really nice! well done!