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  Jakeanator 2011-10-13

  i made it with my over ear headphones so i didn't realize there was that much bass 0.0

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  Jakeanator 2011-10-13

  #3 its supposed to like drift off

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  Jakeanator 2011-10-13

  k tom ill lower the bass, just a little though i like it. ya the synth could use some tweaking. #3 it's supposed to be high. #4 maybe. #5 i kinda tried that before but it made it sounds completely different. I'll try the compress and kick thingy

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  Perspective 2011-10-13

  ... bass is still way too high o.O

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  Perspective 2011-10-13

  Oh and maybe through in a little compression on the bass with the side chain coming off the kick

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  Perspective 2011-10-13

  K... I got a big list of things for you to do when you open this back up:

  1. Lower the bass on the first bass, or just lower the volume on that whole feed. Makes it sound too over powering

  2. Simplify your drums @ the beginning. Simplicity can sound really good because it will give it a nice clean feel.

  3. I think the chord melody thingy that fades in and out could use a little bit more square waveform to sharpen it up a little. When you do that though, I would put a Parametric Equalizer on it and filter out the high ends.

  4. The same could be said for the synth that starts the chords after it changes completely at about the halfway point.

  5. Lower the attack down to .0998 or what ever it is that the lowest point is on the melody synths because it'll make it sound cleaner and it will sync up a lot better with your kicks.

  But other than all that ^^^^^^^^^^^^^, pretty good. You're coming up with more interesting chords which is a pretty big first step. Work on your drums though and do your best to try to make your synths sound as clean as possible, that is unless you're going for filth. Thats about it :) keep going with it. Your making progress