WHOA!! Looks like me from x years ago found out how to use samples!! Using the power of my awful theory, my dumb brain AND SAMPLES - I have created this new garbage - a straight monstrosity from a radioactive site. Anyways, enjoy cringing
Wow... Made with only the default drums?
This is too good!
(The overall song is great tho :D)
Nov 1, 21
I did end up switching the default clap with a rim because I thought it would fit the song better
Oct 31, 21
Pros:
I like what you did with the drums here. The flanger and the kind of... distant feeling feel nice. Consider taking a look at the Curve: I think you'd like what it can do!
My three favorite parts would have to be the arps coming in at , the drop at , and the strings at . Are those real? (If not, they sure sound real) That provides a rarely seen element on audiotool that helps you stand out in a positive way. Good use of the default drumset btw
Nov 1, 21
That would be epic if you could! And thanks for the encouraging words :)
Nov 1, 21
also, if you want some feedback from more people, I could post you on my wall, if you want...
Nov 1, 21
Oh, if the short melody is an artistic choice then you're just fine! That was just my opinion and you're not obligated to make any changes
That said, I'm excited to see what you'll produce in the future!
P.S. That's a good sounding virtual instrument
Nov 1, 21
way in order to keep the moment of satisfaction down (as if listening through the rest of the piece was worth it I suppose) but it was probably not the right thing to do. I'll try doing what you recommended in another piece, and fix the smaller little things you reported. Thank you very much for the advice! Happy Halloween!
Nov 1, 21
Hey! Thank you so much for the advice. It's a real struggle to get feedback on songs here. The violin isn't real unfortunately, I recorded samples from a virtual instrument. I tried really hard on the drums as that was my initial objective and my weak spot, so thanks for the encouraging words! Also the advice for the ambient sounds is pretty useful. I felt like it was off but not 100% sure how to make it sound better. About the melody, I was a bit aware it was short, and I wanted to keep it that
Nov 1, 21
Advice Cont.
The crowd noises around are a bit jarring. (I can also make out words they are saying) Maybe a bit of a gentler fade in and out while reducing low end (at that specific part) could help.
- feels empty: maybe a fade in?
These are small nitpicks, nice work overall.
Nov 1, 21
Advice:
I feel like you just barely started the melody and then it was over. If you want to extend the melody without much work, you could use the rasselbock or pitch shift your instruments in order to continue the idea easily.
The Ambient Noise has a lot of low end, and that can make it a bit overwhelming when trying to hear the bass or the drums.
Wow... Made with only the default drums? This is too good! (The overall song is great tho :D)
Pros: I like what you did with the drums here. The flanger and the kind of... distant feeling feel nice. Consider taking a look at the Curve: I think you'd like what it can do! My three favorite parts would have to be the arps coming in at , the drop at , and the strings at . Are those real? (If not, they sure sound real) That provides a rarely seen element on audiotool that helps you stand out in a positive way. Good use of the default drumset btw